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Please critique! Thank you! The veteran Pathfinder and his small team of three trudges through freezing and the snowy world of the Imperium known by gue’las or better known as humans Normandy. Shas’ui Dar’lion has spent what felt like eternal exploring and gather intel on this world. This world was a place where the higher nobility of the Imperium spent their time indulging themselves with their own riches. The gue’las spent most of their days hunting down exotic predators from different parts of the imperium. The original wildlife of Normandy became non-existent because of the strange and vicious predators that was b

    It was late cold and snowy night, as he dragged his tired and aching body through snows filled road until he finally came up to a small reclusive village. This winter was unforgiving this year in Felderan but it was better than a road filled with bandits or demons. It had been a year since the famed Herald of Andraste closed the breach. Thedas was still trying to recover from the aftermath. This welcome opportunity of banditry and power-hungry lords who wished to expand their territory. Greedy mercenaries who flexed their muscles around poor settlements and forcing those who can’t defend themselves to pay “protection” fe

I'm still new to the Warhammer universe and I'm not really great at typing grammatical correct. So I really sorry for the spelling errors and etc. I wondering someone can help me with writing this bio and help me out. Cromir Winterthorne “The Black Hound of The Inquisition”. Winterthorne a well-renown inquisitorial stormtrooper among the Inquisition. The record of his homeworld origin and the event that sent his life at the bottom of the Imperium and his eventual rise to the top is kept classified.  He was born during  980.M41 raised in a a unknown Death World until age of nine in terran years. His family would leave the planet d